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सुंदर तरुणी दिसल्यावर...

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तशी तिची अन माझी ओळख नव्हती तरिही
तशी बायको सोबत माझी होती तरिही
नकळत माझ्या छातीमध्ये कळ आली अन
तिला केशरी बासुंदीची साय म्हणालो
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नकळत जे ओठांवर आले, कसे आवरू?
चुकून मी पत्नीस म्हणालो 'पहा पाखरू'
तिला पाखरू म्हटलो ते म्हटलोच आणि मी
'तिच्यापुढे तू अगदीच गोगलगाय' म्हणालो
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तिला पाहुनी जरी बायको 'अहा' म्हणाली
चला घरी मग तुम्हा दावते, पहा म्हणाली
घडायचे जे घरात, डोळ्यासमोर आले...
(दिसेल माझे नशीब दुसरे काय? म्हणालो!)
सुंदर तरुणी दिसल्यावर मी हाय म्हणालो!

हाय ऐकुनी तरुणी तर ती हसून गेली
मला पाहण्या पत्नी कंबर कसून गेली!
धावत मी पत्नीच्या मागे जाता जाता...
परिणामांना मी डरतो की काय म्हणालो!
सुंदर तरुणी दिसल्यावर मी हाय म्हणालो!

जरी तिला बोलांचा माझ्या तिटकाराही
मला आवडे तिचा असा हा फणकाराही
चिडल्यावरती नेहमीच ती सुंदर दिसते!
म्हणून तर भलत्या तरुणीला हाय म्हणालो!
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खूप छान

खूप छान सगळ्या , सुंदर अप्रतिम अशाच कविता करत राहा हि शुभेचा
आणि सिते वरील संदेश हि छान

एक्द्म

एक्द्म बेसट

मस्त छान

मस्त छान भारि वाट्ले
अमोल काकडे

खुप छ्हन

खुप छ्हन कविति आहे.

एक्दम

एक्दम झकास्! वा क्या बात है!

झकास

झकास

मस्त!!!

मस्त!!!

Hey. An idea is salvation by

Hey. An idea is salvation by imagination.
I am from Cape and know bad English, please tell me right I wrote the following sentence: "As opposed to bulky wrought iron furniture however, aluminum sling patio furniture can be easily stacked for storage."

With respect :D, Riona.

Good Day. Nothing is more

Good Day. Nothing is more conducive to peace of mind than not having any opinions at all.
I am from Qatar and learning to speak English, please tell me right I wrote the following sentence: "The distinct map is a casino of game with game trend, online casino slot."

Thanks ;-). Gana.

Good evening. It is

Good evening. It is fortunate to be of high birth, but it is no less so to be of such character that people do not care to know whether you are or are not.
I am from Sri and too bad know English, give please true I wrote the following sentence: "Traceback (most recent call last):"

Best regards :o, Varick.

तुमची ही

तुमची ही कविता मला फार आवडली.यंदाच्या प्रेम दिनासाठी अगदी साजेशी कविता आहे.

वेर्य्निच

वेर्य्निचे

Could you help me. An honest

Could you help me. An honest politician is one who, when he is bought, will stay bought.
I am from Dominican and learning to write in English, give please true I wrote the following sentence: "Deal with financial crisis through cash advance loans by andrew dawson at ezine articles."

Regards ;) Livi.

Excuse me. If you are out to

Excuse me. If you are out to describe the truth, leave elegance to the tailor.
I am from Haiti and also now teach English, please tell me right I wrote the following sentence: "Outdoor patio furniture time to give style to your boring patio."

Thank you so much for your future answers :o. Hedda.

अप्रतिम

अप्रतिम आहे!

Good Day. I phoned my dad to

Good Day. I phoned my dad to tell him I had stopped smoking. He called me a quitter.
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Thank you so much for your future answers ;-). Mervin.

Hi. The trouble with having

Hi. The trouble with having an open mind, of course, is that people will insist on coming along and trying to put things in it.
I am from Burma and learning to speak English, please tell me right I wrote the following sentence: "The last is particularly true in case of patio furniture."

Thank 8-) Chalmers.

क्या बात

क्या बात है..!

क्या बात

क्या बात है..!

wअह खुप

wअह खुप छ्हन अहे
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